This will be good with some editing. In class last lesson, we discussed why you should remove 'Furthermore' as a slide title. On that slide, edit text so that it doesn't drop off the end but instead remains legible. Check all your text choices: some of the red is illegible against the background once posted on your blog. Edit so that the slide text doesn't clash with the right hand side of your blog.
Please ensure that this Emaze is set to public so that it can be read by me and others.
ReplyDeleteIf you delete your introductory link (which takes us to Emaze homepage, leaving only the actual Emaze, it will solve the problem!
ReplyDeleteThis will be good with some editing. In class last lesson, we discussed why you should remove 'Furthermore' as a slide title. On that slide, edit text so that it doesn't drop off the end but instead remains legible. Check all your text choices: some of the red is illegible against the background once posted on your blog. Edit so that the slide text doesn't clash with the right hand side of your blog.
ReplyDeleteYou need to carry out the corrections requested so that this work is legible.
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